Plot: HELP MEEEEE!

So yeah. The plot (what plot) needs help!

We know there's a war and El and Jaz are involved but other than that, not much. Eltana dies and is brought back by Khala and that's all we have really.

Mabey jasper can somehow be involved in the fact that she dies,I mean like he had some role in her death that majorly effects the plot of the story.That's all I got,sorry.

Eh, if we factor in that Jasper killed Eltana, then why would he still be a rookie? I mean, he's still scouting the forest for the spirituals, and he's had experience with them?

I believe introducing either more Steampunky people would be great, especially with my idea for this old man that is Jasper's mentor.

Kinda like he took the boy off of the street kinda thing, and Jasper's his apprentice. Stop me if I get way off track with your views of Jasper's life. Kinda since early childhood, (I want to call this old man Jebediah Tork) and he's a steampunk inventor with his machines going all amock most of the time. I do want him to have some kind of machine friend. Maybe like a small bird or rat machine. Something simple he can wind up or something (lol robotnik guys, yes. xD;; ) I kinda see him with either a glass eye or monocle that does something really awesome.

Uhh.... still kinda developing him in my head visual wise. xD;;

as of now, we may not have to factor this in!

Under any occasion, we might be able to factor in some of those aspects into the current father figure that Jasper does have - Milo.

Fumagi wrote:

Under any occasion, we might be able to factor in some of those aspects into the current father figure that Jasper does have - Milo.

Jisu told me that Milo was gonna be fat. with a mustache, i believe. and I'm not sure, but he was gonna be a wacky inventor???

Ismael the Monk wrote:

Fumagi wrote:

Under any occasion, we might be able to factor in some of those aspects into the current father figure that Jasper does have - Milo.

Jisu told me that Milo was gonna be fat. with a mustache, i believe. and I'm not sure, but he was gonna be a wacky inventor???

Does that not sound similar to what you posed?

Ismael the Monk wrote:

Fumagi wrote:

Under any occasion, we might be able to factor in some of those aspects into the current father figure that Jasper does have - Milo.

Jisu told me that Milo was gonna be fat. with a mustache, i believe. and I'm not sure, but he was gonna be a wacky inventor???

I said that' just what I thought of him. I didn't say it was the final word. In my mind he's kinda overweight and balding with a mustache. I picture him wearing an apron over his work clothes and kinda covered in grease and stuff. He's not so much an inventor as just a mechanic. Works at a shop that he owns. Jasper's his apprentice and he really does care for the kid even though he's rather harsh on him. He's the closest thing Jasp ever gets to a parent.

Anyway, that's how I picture him. So we obviously have two clashing ideas. At some point we should take a vote or somthing to decide if we're going with Milo or Jebediah. XD

EcroXineoph wrote:

Ismael the Monk wrote:

Fumagi wrote:

Under any occasion, we might be able to factor in some of those aspects into the current father figure that Jasper does have - Milo.

Jisu told me that Milo was gonna be fat. with a mustache, i believe. and I'm not sure, but he was gonna be a wacky inventor???

I said that' just what I thought of him. I didn't say it was the final word. In my mind he's kinda overweight and balding with a mustache. I picture him wearing an apron over his work clothes and kinda covered in grease and stuff. He's not so much an inventor as just a mechanic. Works at a shop that he owns. Jasper's his apprentice and he really does care for the kid even though he's rather harsh on him. He's the closest thing Jasp ever gets to a parent.

Anyway, that's how I picture him. So we obviously have two clashing ideas. At some point we should take a vote or somthing to decide if we're going with Milo or Jebediah. XD

GO JEBEDIAH.

lol sorry. I kinda have a thing for that cranky old man that will sound like a mix of Master Roshi/Gopher from winnie the Pooh. ^_^;;

NOOOOO FUCK YOU. NO SSSSSSSSSSSSSSUFFERIN VOCABULARY.

GAH. IT'S IN MY HEAD! HIS VOICE!!! NOOoooooooooo

... Go Jebediah.

Tynan can do that whistley thing when he says Ss because of his retainer. Sorry if that was REALLY random but in my mind it seemed relevant. XD;

EcroXineoph wrote:

Tynan can do that whistley thing when he says Ss because of his retainer. Sorry if that was REALLY random but in my mind it seemed relevant. XD;

Pretty relevant. Seeing as I heard it FROM tynan just today.

But yeah. Tynan's his voice actor if we ever get that far ahead. and if Jebediah gets the role. xD

btw


STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN

;o;

*facepalm*